All Comments on 'Solstice Invitation'

by BlissMara

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun5 months ago

Lovely. So incredibly evocative.

Bn2fBn2f5 months ago

A hearty welcome back.

MigbirdMigbird5 months ago

Both solstices so special; so rich with possibilities, but you’ve created a feeling so inviting, so imaginative. Last two line captures my feeling/the image.

Paul4playPaul4play5 months ago

Beautiful and perfect for the winter solstice.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnow5 months ago

Yes, sometimes we have to go through a long, dark period to return with a new inner light.

GoldFreyaGoldFreya5 months ago

This imagery is so quiet and inviting. It takes me deep into my soul, searching for that burning beacon of light within. How utterly beautiful

elizalooelizaloo5 months ago

Your adept manner of weaving words together to form pictures and create emotion within the reader is unparalleled! I read in awe, again.

Satyr61Satyr615 months ago

Incredible. Magical. Provocative & well written.

ThatNewGuyThatNewGuy3 months ago

Beautiful. The alliteration and simplicity of that first stanza really sets the tone. Love the interplay of darkness and light, stillness and motion, inside and out. Also love your unique and striking phrasing, especially "Unlighted place of your deep-down." This is a poem that I expect I'll come back to and read again.

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