by BlissMara
Both solstices so special; so rich with possibilities, but you’ve created a feeling so inviting, so imaginative. Last two line captures my feeling/the image.
Yes, sometimes we have to go through a long, dark period to return with a new inner light.
This imagery is so quiet and inviting. It takes me deep into my soul, searching for that burning beacon of light within. How utterly beautiful
Your adept manner of weaving words together to form pictures and create emotion within the reader is unparalleled! I read in awe, again.
Beautiful. The alliteration and simplicity of that first stanza really sets the tone. Love the interplay of darkness and light, stillness and motion, inside and out. Also love your unique and striking phrasing, especially "Unlighted place of your deep-down." This is a poem that I expect I'll come back to and read again.