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RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years ago
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To write about love's journey (from start to betrayal and loss and then possible salvation) is a gift few can boast of, but to be able to tell it in beautifully metered sonnets is even rarer.

Bravo, chasten! These are simply remarkable.

Bebop3Bebop3over 3 years ago

Deep and touching. Nice work, Mr. Chasten.

SisterJezabelSisterJezabelover 3 years ago

So powerful. Thank-you.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

All in, the weakness from sudden blows, the self-earned strength, despair and hope, doubts and thruths. Lots of dark clouds, but silver lining too.

Good one.

Thanks for sharing

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Amazing

Your poetic words describe the stages in a very powerful way. Thank you for writing this.

PickFictionPickFictionover 3 years ago
Another side

Of Mr. chasten. Excellent job.. Great thoughts and substance plus the iambic pentameter is nearly flawless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Amazing. Just. Amazing.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

A melodrama in five acts in very different, but balanced shades with tears and smiles, breaking and healing love

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19 Mar ’24: Well, I published a story in a category I didn't expect to visit. Except that, every once in a while, I have this idea of trying to write something in each one Literotica has. However, I write very slowly. And since I've only done stories in nine out of thirty-two ...