by chasten
To write about love's journey (from start to betrayal and loss and then possible salvation) is a gift few can boast of, but to be able to tell it in beautifully metered sonnets is even rarer.
Bravo, chasten! These are simply remarkable.
All in, the weakness from sudden blows, the self-earned strength, despair and hope, doubts and thruths. Lots of dark clouds, but silver lining too.
Good one.
Thanks for sharing
Your poetic words describe the stages in a very powerful way. Thank you for writing this.
Of Mr. chasten. Excellent job.. Great thoughts and substance plus the iambic pentameter is nearly flawless.
A melodrama in five acts in very different, but balanced shades with tears and smiles, breaking and healing love
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