All Comments on 'Ten Days in Spain'

by Peter_Cleveland

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BenLongBenLong8 months ago

Cute Peter! A bawdy little limerick that oh-so-accurately exactly catches my experience with Spanish women. Viva La difference!

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoes8 months ago

He went back. He's in the sack? Will he tell us more? Is she young? Is she old? A virgin or a whore?

Five stars.

luv2custripluv2custrip8 months ago

If only they taught practical Spanish in high school, such as “how to seduce Spanish ladies;” I may have stayed awake in class. And gotten more than a “C.”

tennesseeredtennesseered8 months ago

Oh, no! Giant rats, too?

Whew! Guess I read that wrong.

It seems a trip to Spain is in order.

AndyAndrewsAndyAndrews8 months ago

Fucking brilliant! If only i can dump Mrs Andy i'll go to Spain.

JBEdwardsJBEdwards8 months ago

Oh, you old rake, you! It's nice you brought a little sunshine into the lives of some otherwise miserably horny women. Is it all the sun? Is it the heat? The paella? The Sangria? Great poem and five stars. ~~JB

enbijienbiji8 months ago

Well done! My kinda poem 💘

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

They are catholic girls, after all ;-)

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A new story is nearing completion. It should be up and running by the end of October, 2023. (It's not a Halloween story, though.) The series "New Corporate Courtesan" is still in progress, but the Muse seems to have lost a bit of interest in it--only temporarily, I hope. Tha...