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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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I really like to see a new and unusual voice and here's one. I like the quirky internal rhyming. I think this would be terrific in a Poetry Slam situation. It has a driving quality. I'm not sure where it's taking me but I love the journey.

Tess

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