All Comments on 'The Splat in the Flat'

this was supposed to be funny -it is- rhyming zipple with nipple doesn't cause ther ripple you hoped it would, but some of the others are pretty good

For quirky lines as these; "For electric, erotic/Eclectical buzzes./Her hands were exploring/My testicular fuzzes./She tickled my prickle,/And got quite a rise." or for the odacious humor (of course it was meant to be be funny 1201)

I find it worth the search among the parts which I would have recommended to edit out. Still, it was very much a fun read. Thanks.

I had a grin on my face through the whole thing. Loved the end!

Took too long to read, I was laughing so hard; Seuss in Litland's erotic gardens — almost too much to handle.