The Vitruvean Man

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Sex and eroticism in open verse
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Leonardo drew the Vitruvean Man incompletely.
Instead of a soft phallus hanging down,
he should have drawn a magnificent staff, pointing up.
Far more useful as a measure, far more useful as a man.

On such a drawing, one could circumscribe diagonals, pivots,
the centre of circles, the whole point of zero, the whole point of one.

There is a smaller pivot, a nub, around which
a woman revolves, especially when my tongue
is upon it, pointed and twirling, swirling,
or flat like a broad brush, licking up the wet juice from below.

I have a yen for a ¥, that opening up, that grail of a cup,
that place from which honey drops down.
That quick divide, that split, that crease,
the half moon circumference, it's mine.

Around the back I find the round orbs of two moons,
with a penumbral place in between.
There's a solstice, a moon shadow,
my special dark place, my tongue to penetrate thickly.

On hands and knees, she offers herself up,
pushes back, pushes up, her incarnadine peach to be eaten.
Sweet juice spreads on my lips, fills my mouth, and I swallow.

In a bed in a cave under covers, I can explore.
It's done in darkness, there's perfume to guide me,
limbs to follow, curves to follow round.

There's a spiral in a maze in a circle,
and a silver cord wrapped around my finger.
I'm not given a choice, I don't want one.
The chord tugs, she's singing my name and I'm drowning.
I'll swim when I want to, until then I'll float.

Up in the sky, I'm flying!

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AG31AG315 months ago

Five stars for the first two stanzas, and then on purely literary grounds.

PureoticaPureotica5 months ago

Nice poem, aesthetically. Rhythm. Language. Imagery. The components work well together.

Complex. Chaotic in a good way. But it still feels unified and cohesive.

My only critique, and it isn't really a criticism, is that my immersion came to a crashing halt when I came to the symbol, because my brain had to process it. But that might be an American problem. Reserve currency privilege. We don't see non-dollar notations as often as our cosmopolitan friends, I'd wager. Not sure if it's Yen (Japan) or Yuan (China) or a symbol for something else. I thinks it works as is, but it's a mental speedbump. Not saying you should change it. Just giving feedback for reference.

P.S. I looked it up. Turns out yen and yuan use the same symbol. And the symbol is erotically suggestive given the subject matter. It works as internal rhyme or near rhyme and the turn on words is kind of brilliant. Keep it. Fuck whatever confusion it causes to us sheltered yanks. We'll just have to adjust. lol

LlehllaLlehlla5 months ago

Apologies to Coleridge:

Circles, circles, every where

The phallus it did shrink

Circles, circles every where

Nor any shaft to sink.

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