All Comments on 'This bloody sword'

Can someone vote or leave a reply/comment? I am starting to feel unloved.

i do not think the poetry section here has a lot of readers so i do not know if there is audience here for poems. (i found this submission from your author page)

I doubt you feel any less unloved after I tell you that with all the labored repetition, it is somewhat of a chore to read. You could compress this into 1/4 the size without any loss of details.

It is hard to criticize something that a person wrote while in recovery from any form of addiction, especially when the writing may have played an important role in said recovery. No one wants to be the bad guy.