All Comments on 'what you do to me'

by Zandrite

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Such a romantic, initimate lover's talk.

Thanks for those inspirational words.

shadow_stormshadow_stormover 3 years ago

Beautifully written!

blkassbabeblkassbabeover 3 years ago
I like ...

What he's doing to you. Obviously he is doing a good job of it.

SeemaNaazSeemaNaazover 3 years ago
Erotic

Well written ,love it

tazz317tazz317over 3 years ago
OF THE 5 SENSES

if they have to wait for taste, by passing the other 4, longevity isn't a given for this pair. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Hi, this is Zan. I write stories, poems... and occasionally things you might call a hybrid of the two. I love to hear opinions, so feel free to comment or contact if you have thoughts about what you’ve read. I’m dreamy, idealistic, a little kinky... and prone to such brillia...