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LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
Nicely rhyming stanzas beginning and end bracket the turmoil of a love lost. Just seems that the 4th stanza is a bit clichéd, predictable. And check out whisper.
My Erotic Trailabout 17 years agonice write
nothing lasts forever and promises are mostly broken by death... thanks for the read (~_~)
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