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by Du Lac

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Colorful

Some really nice images here, DuLac!

Flyguy

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
revision

You should post this on the board and get some suggestions for a revision. This poem deserves it. It's very close to being Damn Good!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
loved it then

loved it more now, <grin>

The poem had been worked on for awhile

and thanks Du for allowing me to see it

grow <smile> poem sprout and blossomed

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
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This one is so good, I wish I could write this well.

TY,BD

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