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That I find I like in most places. The fevered pace and wall of accusation, coupled with doubt and fear in abundance, is quite palpable. With a little more structure, it could really sing and cut deep. It does already, don't get me wrong, but I am simply saying it could do so more with some formatting, in my opinion. The chaotic mass of emotion that it currently is certainly has its own powerful charm, however, and I will be reading it a few times to ensure that I get everything out of it that I can.

No words left to say. I feel every word.

I fight for him to never win but he did