All Comments on 'ZMP ~ mountain'

"like the earth is reaching

To kiss a cloud"

I have a difficult time with end rhyme that falls into predictability. However I really like this line! I had to read the poem twice to put it together, with the verse change inbetween. Those enjambments get me every time :)

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amid the cluster green mountains..it may have been said before...but ,,not by

U>...UBOK...blue

ZMA you know I love ZMPS but I don't see the ZEN in this one? I am not smart. -Scotty

good job!

T ;)

"like the earth is reaching

To kiss a cloud"...

original in content,

and I love the thought,

planted here,

like a seed ..

and left a new breath

between the lines,

and me.

.......breathe........

-sGp-