All Comments on '12 Labors of Hercules, Caged Pt. 05'

You really need to examine your grammar. You continually use he and she in the wrong place. It makes the reading of a decent story difficult. I say decent because you also go off and have Cathy drop the stupid Greek myth characters and ideas into her speech. It might work for a pompous ass like Richard but it is out of place to use it so much for the others. It detracts from the plot itself.

The Greek characters are awesome!! Yes it takes some effort to work through some of the misgendered pronouns, but the story is so smart it is well worth it.