All Comments on '18th Birthday gift Pt. 01'

Get an editor. It is painful to read this.

Please write the next part soon

Please continue. Do not end it there like you did in mansion. It can be a great series.

will the girlfriend just tease him and keep him with a nice set of blue balls when he gets back from vacation?

Get an editor

Great Story. Poor Execution

I truly liked the premise of this story. Too bad it is so badly marred by misspellings and other typo's. Could only give 3 stars to what should have been a 5 star story.

I don´t like stupid protagonists. It´s just a personal preference. I don´t like people who use devices they don´t know their purpose of or clueless tourists visiting countries whose rules they don´t know and other tropes...

Probably my bdsm background... you can´t consent to something you don´t even understand.

love the start to this story, please keep writing..

Dumber than a rock