by Motherlicker
I think that every body agrees about how erotic and beautiful is your story but, I think the way you upload this masterpiece like 1 page per day is ruining the highly potential of this story being 1 of the all time top rated and highly appreciated story in Lierotica.com.
If I were you, I would upload that 22 pages or more in maximum 3 or 4 parts to maintain the highly potential of the story getting hit by readers to increase the chance of the story will be read by more satisfied readers the way it is deserved. Of course I understand your right of choice about the uploading method because this is your story. I really respect it. I just want to give you my opinion.
Oh ! ... how enticing this story is. Wonderful creativity and dialogue. Everything is there for an excellent erotic relationship between mother and son.
Love that the son is getting his mom in a situation where he can slowly move toward more and more sexual touches and comments. Will he bed her in the next part? I'm hoping that the incest begins to flow and mother and son both embrace having good hot fucking and sucking (of his dick and her pussy). I wonder if there will be an piss scenes or ass eating. seems that Alan liked do both with Mom.
Love, sucks and hot mother fucks,
Bob
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