by Motherlicker
Another great series of chapters with great narration and hot action between mother and son. While the adventure or the progress of the story is quite idealistic, there remains a side or degree of realism to it. This is what I like. We are always left with a question that makes us want to find the answer in the following chapter. This is the sign of a good writer ... always keeping his readers on the edge with curiosity. I voted you another 5 stars.