All Comments on '2008 Ch. 04'

Not really in to BDSM, but this story fascinates me. First read every morning.

Awaiting 05!

A different story that I am really enjoying reading. Keep up the good work

Oh the writing is fabulous. But I still cannot see why Pete wants to keep Kaye and / or why force her into becoming a submissive.

Pete trying to turn Kaye into a submissive seems like the height of lunacy. Love this guy's writing, but this story makes no sense to me.

I new once the tattoo was found, him forgiving her with her infidelity staring him in the face that he would not be able to overcome his bad feelings.

A really good Story so far.

Can you actually believe the nerve of Kaye? Having her cunt tattooed with her lovers name while still married? Thats one for the books.

After discovering that it would have taken all my strength to abstain from killing her. Unbelievable.

struck me as highly unlikely, given her interpretation of feminism and her history of moving on to new lovers when she craves excitement. That said, I'm perfectly capable of suspending belief and enjoying your story.

Rusalka

I'm so glad I started reading the novels category. I love this series so much. I wish tho that Kaye could've stayed. It seems unlikely, though, when she's resistant to everything around her.

great but a lot of mistakes. like Beth wanting to cum but she already did earlier on the picnic table. Why give up a paid day at the cabin to move her stuff, do it Mon. or Tue. night. She won't need clothes all weekend anyway, LOL