All Comments on '2012@Post Presidential Hi-Jinks'

Give your characters names, "female News journalist" over and over gets kinda old and cumbersome as does "Presidential hopeful candidate". Also, your story doesn't flow. It reads more like a series of bullet points than a story.

perhaps this should have been in "reviews and essays".

This "story" should actually have been two separate attempts. The first could have been a great satire concerning the alleged womanizing presidential candidate (we all know who) and a glory-hound female newscaster who will do anything to get a scoop. The second, then, would be an essay on the upcoming presidential primaries and your opinions on each potential candidate. Combining the two into what appeared here was misguided and heavy-handed--I came into what I thought would be an interesting story and ended up with a subjective rant that went nowhere. Not fair.