All Comments on '3 teens 1 pool'

As the author I encourage feedback. Is this story worth a part 2? It was typed on my iPhone so I understand there will be some grammatical issues. I hope that doesn’t take away from the readers experience. Any suggestions for a part 2 or a rewrite?

Yes! PLEASE continue this story. I never comment on stories, just enjoy and move on, but this is fantastic and im really enjoying your tone/writing style.

You are really not a very good writer. Sorry.

Yes Finnish the story

Where is page 2?