All Comments on '600 Pounds of Love Pt. 02'

by ChloeHay

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well, "Nuts"

As General Anthony McAuliffe famously said on December 22, 1944. I've been busy and lax getting here but I expected if not a better response to this story at least something.

Pretty easy to see where Kendra's lack of self esteem came from in the beginning. I have a bit of a seething anger at people who make fun of or use people less well off than themselves whether it be emotional, physical or financial. Kendra seriously needs help at least in the way of therapy to deal with her issues in order to accomplish an attitude adjustment. Which is Way Different than the one that Curtis deserves and needs. So, if you see fit to drop his stupid ass off around here I'm sure something could be arranged. I was really expecting good old Curtis to have set up a gangbang for her to make her first time 'Special', thanks for not doing that. In retrospect I think as I type this I owe you an apology for that thought as your style hasn't been that way. She doesn't need that stainless steel prison toilet yet, but it appears she's well on her way, sadly.

I spent some years seemingly collecting birds with broken wings so to speak, but without her seeking professional mental and physical help I don't see how I could have done much for her. If you have her getting the help she needs she would have a lot to offer. I hope in your later chapters you find a way for it to turn out the way it should for her.

My apologies Chloe for being a bit late to the party. As always, *'s, as in more than * or **. Signed: BTW

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Can't wait for more

There aren't many stories that are as willing to show the dark side of dating, especially as a fat girl. Really want to hear how this ends, and I'm praying for a happy ending!

ChloeHayChloeHayover 3 years agoAuthor

Hello Anonymous,

This story is really important to me...this is a romance of someone morbidly obese and I want to make sure I hit all the points the way I need to...right now we are experiencing her disappointment and heartbreak, but I want to delve in further into her thoughts and make it realistic as possible...she has a problem and I want to resolve it but not before going into it deeper..it may take me quite a bit to circle back to this story though...but I should have another chapter or two before January gets here.

BTW...that gangbang would have been a dark scene...I don't think my fragile character would have recovered from it. (To be honest, there are several topics that I don't think I could write about...I thought I could go real dark but inside I am really a wuss and a hardcore romantic, but who knows you may see a Daddy/daughter gangbang, cumfest from me just yet) Actually, in my mind...Curtis actually did like Kendra and didn't expect to leave her hanging like that, but she doesn't know that or rather the reader doesn't...

ChloeHayChloeHayalmost 3 years agoAuthor

I am sorry to have left this one hanging in limbo while I was sick, it's hard for me to picture this story now since it's been so long, I will leave it up but am not sure I will finish it and may start on a new project. I'll make sure to finish my stories before releasing them.

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It's been some months that I have been away, I have not been feeling good and have a hospitalization and had to abandon writing for a bit, but I am back and ready to take on the tasks of writing new works and finishing the stories I have started previously. Fucking Monsters ...

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