All Comments on '750 Word Challenge - Only Her'

2P POV is hot!

But seriously, well done. Very engaging, very sensuous!

that was incredibly beautifully written and even as a male made me feel how i do about my own partner. this was so cute

Erotic expression. Liked the anonymity.

Nice little vignette in the 2nd Person. 5 stars from me.

@StillStunned and @Phoenickz_03 - Thank you guys. Appreciate your support, as always! Tried to go almost a little poetic with this one, to fit the second-person-point-of-view. Really had to adapt my writing style to fit the challenge, but that was part of the fun.

Wow. That reads almost as poetry. It has the feel of a love letter, but not the structure. Quite beautiful in it’s own way. As I was reading, I felt reminded of those stories without punctuation,

or maybe stream of consciousness, but this was not that. Well done, five stars.

Beautiful! So much like how I feel about my lover.

Stunningly beautiful! What more can I say??

Nicely done. This was an unusual case where the second person POV worked well for the story, and you handled it well.