by Devinter
Sweet short tale, you pack an enormous back-story into just a few engaging words. Lovely.
Such a interesting text! I kept asking myself what would happen all along and was so please by the way it goes
Maybe he was having a crisis of morality and didn't want to betray his current marriage and perhaps the marriage of the email recipient? This gentleman managed to successfully survive but now this dickwad meddler feels the need to undue a successful defeat of potential moral terputude. What an asshole.
In this version of my response you get to see, it ends with the three words: I love it.
@Yowser - Thank you. Glad you appreciated it. @Dessertman - The point is to try to create something that has some sort of emotional impact in just 750 words, which is the shortest story that Literotica allows us to publish. It's more difficult than it sounds, especially in the letters and transcripts category. @Anon - I like the term "dickwad meddler". Haha. Will put that one to memory. @Other Anons - Cheers!
I have to try this format. But I doubt I could create the simple beauty that you did. Bravo! Em
Thank you guys. I appreciate your warming words in these cold winter times!
Wow that was really Sweet, I think the Only thing that would make it that much more Realistic is a Fake Email Address and a Fake Subject Matter. But that part is not that Necessary.
Bravo! What a wholly original conception! But was the man writing at the next table merely a sock puppet for the message writer? ------ " I love you". ------ We will never know from whom the sentiment originates, which is as it should be. 5 stars indeed!