by happyhusband_123
This is the worst story I’ve ever read on Literotica! Just because the author claims it to be true is no excuse for such horrific grammar.
Get an editor. Dreadful story anyway.
Literally unreadable!
Excuse the grammar? Sorry, it's unreadable.
Keep it coming mate. Ignore the arm chair critics.
Dr beulahthemick; Total crap, poor grammer, unreadable as well, minus ten.
strains credulity a bit...she'd be dead in real life