All Comments on 'A Babysitter's Christmas Gift'

Always amazing work!

Illustrations look like mannequins, surely you can do better. Story is your typical plot; good for first time readers but for regular readers there is not much interest. Challenge yourself, not just for you but for us. Thanks for the read.

As usual, your stories are the best. I love the way your mind works and exciting images it projects, and the way Tex is able to translate that visually.

Always a pleasure to read your sexy stories.

Great story. Happy holidays to you and yours Jasmine. From the 3 of us.

Huh, I thought the computer created images where better than usual. I’m so glad that you’re still on this site. Thanks for another great erotic adventure.

Rose Monroe 🌹

What a deliciously dirty fantasy! Your prose is sufficient to get me dripping like a leaky gap, Jasmine. The addition of illustrations doesn't do much for me, but you obviously enjoy including them. I'm looking forward to reading more of your filthy stories in 2023. In the meantime, may I wish you and your famiky a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Merci les images illustrées sont magnifiques, hélas un peu moins l'histoire et c'est fort dommage, merci pour le partage et passer d'excellente fête.

Thank you the illustrated pictures are beautiful, alas a little less the story and it's a shame, thank you for sharing and have a great party.

My how your standards have fallen. This should be categorized as same old, same old. I agree with anon, the new readers might get off on this schtick, but not anyone who's been reading for a while. Stories like this is why I don't follow you anymore, and seldom read new stories written by you. They're all the same only different. Since you don't like negative responses, this will likely be deleted. But then, that's your problem not mine.

The bent over illustration where she looks back at Amber is full on body horror

As always a great story 5 stars. Thanks Peter. Merry Christmas and have a naughty New Year!!!

How I love this story! It has my favorite sexy acts, worshiping female feet with licks and toe-sucking and cunt dining. So highly arousing. I wish I could have given it more, but the site allowed only five stars. Thanks, Jas.

Does Dwight get any sex with his wife, or with any of Amber's harem?

Once again!!! Outstanding story

Good story, Merry Christmas to you too.

I enjoyed your story as always! This style of pictures doesn't add to the story from my perspective.

This scoring system is very suspicious. And this being a contest , so sad that someone's ego is so small.

Such a high score with amateurish illustrations and storyline that has been totally over used by this writer. Something is not adding up.

I have to agree with anonymous about the scoring. This site is becoming more bogus day after day.

Read this story too many times (just change the names). Score :2.

Good story but I wish you would try to expand your style. Illustrations not great, I like realist black and white better or anything besides stiff cartoonish figures. Merry Christmas!

Personally, I enjoyed the story. A sexy beautifully frustrated wife learning about her suppressed lesbian interests is very arousing when told by the right story teller, like yourself Jasmine.

Have a very Mery Christmas and I loo forward to your next story.

Story too predictable for my taste but others seem to like it. Enjoy the holidays.

Please do better. Same old, same old.

Silk stocking lover writes the best erotica and I drip every time. All of you want to be critics but aren’t publishing sh*t. So if you don’t like it, don’t comment. She can be and is in my fantasy all the time.

Please continue this wonderful story. You have so many subplots to develop and explore. Maybe make Amber a secret feeder as she introduces food and chubs up some of her favorite pets like Katie and lovely African American school director. Katie finds out that her best friend was really a lesbian chubby chaser. Thanks!!

360. Loved it. Sorry that the husband missed out on his sex.

love your stories

Very hot

Very hot!

Loved the story had me leaking, but when did Dwight change his PJs? Are you sure he wasn't peaking and needed a dry pair!

Brilliant

Lots of fun

Thanks Jasmine xx

Philip,

on the coast 120km north of Sydney, Australia

Mmmmmmmm, wonderful lesbian love-making!!! Perhaps the husband could be drawn into the action and used by a number of Amber's pets to play with his "small" 5" cock and sit on it for some not-to-deep fucking. I think he would be thoroughly surprised to find out that Amber, one of Katie's students was excellent in getting his wife to have numerous orgasms. And then that Katie had a number of sexy lesbian pets who were all teachers and staff at school !!! Hell, he might cum to like it all.

I haven't had the pleasure of playing with lesbians, but I did have a wonderful MIL for over 6 years (she lived with us) who had some of her former friends (lovers - both M and F - old singles and old couples) get down and dirty with her. Fortunately, I was invited to join them in her bedroom. So fucking good to have 2 pussies and an old dick some nights. If you'd like more info about those encounters, please contact me at find_two2 at the hotmail dot com. I look forward to your inquiries.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

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"Absolutely HOT, from start to finish and with "all" the women". Well done! Perhaps additional chapters, with the Daughters of the Teachers, who almost caught what was going on. Time to let them in for the seduction by the mother and then Amber for the finale!

Comical illustrations and story is too routine. Three stars.