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All Comments on 'A Bad Day'

by tonz1404

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VirgoPiscesVirgoPiscesover 6 years ago
A Great Story, But...

The story itself was great but i had some trouble following it. Make sure to do some careful editing before submitting the next one

Also, maybe add more back story to their history together so this isn’t just another drunken physical attraction fling

xnichole_lynnxxnichole_lynnxover 6 years ago
Love it

I love this story! Would love to see a second part! 😉

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Five stars (*****)! Bravissimo! The scenario was intelligently conceived and the story line was well crafted. The story is short & sweet. It also is very erotic & totally realistic.

Ashley! Ashley! Ashley! If I ever were with you, i would think i am in 7th Heaven & on cloud number nine at the same time. You definitely are a keeper!

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