All Comments on 'A Bad Day Ch. 02'

Aside from the changing name from Andi to Kelly, this story is professing well. I love the interaction and the plot, along with the erotic content, I am looking forward to chapter 3.

BTW, i prefer Kelly over Andi....

I enjoyed this. Please continue writing. :)

You did such a great job with this story. Please come back and finish

Excellent writing, excellent story, pity you didn’t continue.

I really hope you haven't decided to drop this. You have a wonderful set up and it would be a shame if you stopped know when this story shows so much promise and was just starting to get really good. Please continue.

so far you have my interest. I haven't felt blood flowing below my waist in 5+ years but I actually felt a twinge for a moment.. so hurry and get going with the rest

Your writing is very good. The story is hot, and the premise has promise. Keep going, please.

I need more.

hot hot hot I am loving the mind-fuck, it's almost like he is a figment of her imagination, her alter-ego, supplying her with what her mind subconsciously needs. Very original, please keep writing, at least for 30 days. ;-)