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All Comments on 'A Bad Day for a Flat Tire....'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Written too cold for me taste, I would like the story more descriptive and with a smooth flow. Overall, not bad for a second story.

MarsPatrolMarsPatrolabout 1 year ago

Nice. I really enjoyed it.

creativeandfuncreativeandfunabout 1 year ago

Wonderful story. LOVED it.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I hope you write more like this!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Could had been very good but written too cold for me, three stars.

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