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I guess this could have been OK, were it not for the total confusion of characters all mixed together in such a chaotic way. So many is probably a mistake, but without better sub chapters and paragraph separation, it was a disaster, and I had to admit defeat half way. Several Malapropisms which were amusing, particularly ‘viral’ for ‘virile’.

One would think it obvious the difference between "there" and "their". Except for one or two instances, "their' should have been used 95% of the time. (And that is from someone that all but failed high school English!

Live an learn.)