All Comments on 'A Beach House'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story and well written

I normally don't read NonConsent/Reluctance stories but your story seemed interesting. It kept my interest and I liked how you mixed in Cat & her friend Lynn.

I hope you will continue the story, maybe have the girls bring or locate friends for Gary to mix into their adventures.

Thanks for writing this wonderful and exciting story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Please keep going!

I thought it was a great start and can't wait to see how you end it. Please continue!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it all

I loved your story so much i came in cats ass while you came in lynns lol please continue to write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
mmmm so very nice, now I am wet and horny...with no satisfaction in site....

This was a wonderful story that is exactly what I have fantasized about many times.. I hope you continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
amazing!

i'm sure alot of men and women alike will enjoy this story. Very graphic which i like :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

i truely enjoyed this

i hope there is aother chapter

with both girls...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very nice!

Excellent plot. Hope you continue.

Always_want_moreAlways_want_moreabout 13 years ago
Hot story!

And the smiley faces cracked me up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hot

so damn sexy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Really good keep up the good work!

Awesome story, really kept me glued to my screen!

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 11 years ago
I love this story

A sure hope there are more with these people that are similar

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 11 years ago
Yes, one more chapter.

A hot story with a pretty good plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great read

What a great story had me hard as a rock..what a great fantasy. Have had similar fantasies myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW that it could be do easy

A well crafted story. Simple but very erotic. Five * from me

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
God, WHY.

This story would get good in one paragraph, then the next paragraph would just... Completely kill it. The farting - WTF. Why? It's nasty. Then you have her licking his ass? Jesus...

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