by Funlite2x
This story would get good in one paragraph, then the next paragraph would just... Completely kill it. The farting - WTF. Why? It's nasty. Then you have her licking his ass? Jesus...
A well crafted story. Simple but very erotic. Five * from me
What a great story had me hard as a rock..what a great fantasy. Have had similar fantasies myself.
A sure hope there are more with these people that are similar
Awesome story, really kept me glued to my screen!
i truely enjoyed this
i hope there is aother chapter
with both girls...
i'm sure alot of men and women alike will enjoy this story. Very graphic which i like :)
This was a wonderful story that is exactly what I have fantasized about many times.. I hope you continue!!
I loved your story so much i came in cats ass while you came in lynns lol please continue to write more
I thought it was a great start and can't wait to see how you end it. Please continue!!!!
I normally don't read NonConsent/Reluctance stories but your story seemed interesting. It kept my interest and I liked how you mixed in Cat & her friend Lynn.
I hope you will continue the story, maybe have the girls bring or locate friends for Gary to mix into their adventures.
Thanks for writing this wonderful and exciting story.