All Comments on 'A Beauteous Flower Ch. 19'

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AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

What is with Daniel flying into a raging transformation and losing his shirt before running into the woods after Madison. Too many viewings of Lon Chanet Jr. in Universal werewolf pictures? And what are we to make of the cliffhanger? Is Daniel the beaten puppy dog that follows his abuser? If so the next song will be a Monkees parody " Take the Next Train to Cucksville". Daniel can hum it while he puts logs in the fireplace so Madison will be nice and cozy when she gets back from her date with Steve. Madison, by her own account, is a sub and finding out that Daniel is even more of a sub than her, just one with a good act, will finally clear the fantasy out of her head. Maybe what Madison truly wants is a Steve with a bit more charm, finesse and better manners. 5 stars for a nice chase scene and for setting a hook for the next chapter.

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