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by Wombat_1
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Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThis is simply awful
Maybe in Sci/Fi? Or non-erotic? Or the "Dumb shit" category? This was juvenile.
No stars
26thNCalmost 5 years agoNew
Nothing like this before in LW. Maybe Pixar can turn it into a movie. An Adult Toy Story might sell.
oldbearswitchalmost 5 years agoHate to give an author with such a cool handle a low score but, the creativity was high, the writing not so much. It's an odd plot device, so kudos for trying
I bet you could do a regular story and it would be fine.
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Australian author and will use some Aussie slang. Long term reader, new to writing. Thanks to CreativityTakesCourage for her writing tips.
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