All Comments on 'A Blind Girl Flashes'

Really liked this story! Thanks for sharing with us. Cheers. Frankie

Ehh, sorta good, but... moved a little too quickly from "Hello" to "Fuck me." And a gentleman doesn't even ask if a virgin is protected before he unloads into what may be a very fertile womb? Good try, but I was wavering between a 3 and a 4, and since I can't give it a 3.5, I'm afraid it's a 3.

Judging from your webpage's "Story Submissions" tab, you are back after a long 4+-year hiatus. Welcome back.

I rated your piece worthy of 5 stars. It's a charming vignette, which you craft with a great deal of skill.

From the standpoint of verisimilitude, your readers deserve to know that restoring sight to a person who has been blind from birth is a herculean task. Assuming that the surgery (or other therapeutic intervention) addresses the mechanical aspects successfully, the patient must undertake a long and arduous process of brain conditioning, in order to accept, process, and apply the new sensory inputs. Back in 1999, Val Kilmer starred in a movie, "At First Sight," which sets forth the problem and chronicles the process.

Nevertheless, it is your prerogative as the author to create a fictional universe where such miracles take place.

It's a story, a story of your creation where your imagination holds unchallenged sway. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

@GaiusPetronius

Thanks for your kind comment. I have been somewhat busy for quite some time but now find I have the time to consider a little erotic writing once again.

I do acknowledge everything you say about sight recovery. I twist what is possible to suit a story. After all, no dates are mentioned; it could have been some years in the future... who knows?

Most beautiful story i have read ever love it

Wow...I never read a sex story involving a blind girl before.

This was totally arousing....to be able to give her her first feel of a male's cock.... And make it exciting & memorable....

5 stars

I love this. Great story.