All Comments on 'A Book for a Bookkeeper Ch. 01'

Perfect Story. Looking forward for the next 100 installments! ;-)

Written Greatly..., could totally see myself playin' that part...., KUDOS

Sounds like he will be sweet and nice with other girls but a jerk with Nicola. I love conquering a hot mean boss and being awful to her, looking forward to more? Especially fucking her ass and making her suffer more

The fact he has a limit in the number of women he can claim was an excellent concept. Makes the story more realistic. Great job. Keep it up. Keep up the details. Good creative writing takes effort and details. You just scratched the surface of her conflict... her duality of loving and hating what he is doing with her. Another excellent perspective. Keep that its so real. So many people have such honest dualities..