by A_Devoted_Mommas_Boy
Rather wished you'd kept the anal and the ravishing separate. You'd mentioned in an earlier chapter that they were both anal virgins and his feeling special to be the first and that a more romantic approach could have been taken. This would have balanced out the ravishing aspect which I enjoyed and thought was fun. I've given all the chapters as I've read them 5 stars. Hope you keep posting I enjoy your work