by A_Devoted_Mommas_Boy
A very touching ending to a wonderfully written story. I haven't read something so moving for a long time on this site. It's a great shame that you write, these will be your only posts and would beg you to reconsider.
So many of the stories submitted here are crass insensitive unrealistic with no love, empathy or emotional depth. Your writing is genuinely moving as well as erotic and I will come back from time to time and read this story again. Big 5 stars would give it ten if I could.
If you do change your mind about writing would love a second series where he returns with fiancé ...and they all eventually "live happily ever after", which I think was the ending the previous poster wanted.
Is such separation possible in reality? I am not sure. Humans are emotional beings. This is too much rational - as if everything goes by calculation.
It was a very good story though did not like the ending gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved this story but it didn't have to end they could have lived together as husband and wife and maybe have some children their love for each other was too strong to stop!! You need to continue with them understanding their love will always be a part of their lives!!! 5 Stars