All Comments on 'A buildup to share'

I love that the woman shifts from horny to innocent and bored while they are building up and waiting to have sex, that would drive me wild. The mixing come and kissing through it at the end threw me off a little, but it’s such a dirty idea I respect it. (I would have wanted the girl to insist on coming on his face first, then having him come a lot in her mouth. They would share a soft kiss afterwards instead of explicitly mixing it).

Perhaps the lady in the story is just as dirty and as spontaneous as the idea!

I've no doubt they have performed your idea many times, and I hope it gave you enough inspiration to engage your imagination.