All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter at ComicCon Pt. 02'

I find the POV angle of this story a great way to get to know the characters. The way you went into her daydream was also a wonderful insight to her hopes and possible dreams even if it was fantasy. This is shaping up really interestingly and I cannot wait to see where it goes.

Mitchell

Hey Mitchell - thanks very much for your detailed and constructive feedback. Much appreciated.