All Comments on 'A Charitable Act'

Do continue.

You need help editing though you tell a good story

Gadzooks! I don't know why this story hasn't shot to the top of the ratings at this dive. Very well written and immediately engrossing. Perhaps if you had added some pertinent and compelling Key Words such as lactation, adult nursing, large breasts, clergy, etc., to help stoke the imaginations of would-be readers. Don't let the muted reaction of other voters get you down. You have talent and you are being generous enough to share it with us. I look forward to many more stories. Now, back to read the next two. Merry Christmas! No coal from Santa for you!

Excellent beginning to the story. I like the imagery and the way the story unfolds.