All Comments on 'A Christmas Competition'

That was one hell of a good story. Please continue.

A truly amazing 'love' story. I read it yesterday quickly but was haunted by that last sentence as I went to sleep. So I had to dig if up out of the impossibly hard to navigate archives and reread it today, Lots of reasons to diss it, too little background about Jessica, too many hard to decipher sentences, and definitely no story ending. But I was entranced by the mechanics of it all and her last sentence held SO many unspoken meanings. I just had to favorite you and will soon see what else you have done.

I'm glad these stories stayed with you and were, more or less, enjoyed. Many of the stories I've published in the last year have been commission works and, as such, not necessarily an original story of my own - therefore much more difficult.