by macsporran
Not a bad effort for a first time...is this a true story or a work of your imagination? I think it has elements of a true story, liked your descriptions of Paris and of course the sex. Nice one
What a wonderful day to spend it with a lovely Parisienne lady!!
What a hungry lusty wench she is she is!
Sometimes giving and being controlled just hits the spot right on the money!
Hopefully it was a true story you enjoyed it as much as you wrote it!!!
the mentor
A lovely story with some excellent descriptions of Paris. Loved the 'eating' scene as she came. Great first story, don't stop keep going.
A very classy story with some nice highlights. I love the way the main lady got her wicked way ..... she sounds like a temptress x can't wait to hear more 😘
I enjoyed your story...albeit lacking any embellishment :-)
Very well written and I look forward to more from you.
PS...nice to know there are others who like their anus licked and tongued.