All Comments on 'A Conflict of Interests Ch. 01'

Looks like you need to write a prologue for this prologue. I'm not saying that this is badly written, just that it's really hard to follow. I read this twice and still don't know what's going on here.

Dis agree with the other anon. Everything makes sense, even if things are feeling fast. It alludes to a life before the story started. Great!

Why do people post hot stories and then never release the next chapter.