All Comments on 'A Controlled Descent Ch. 02'

This is probably one of the most thought provoking stories I have ever read on Literotica. The nuances are just incredible

It has been years since I have read something this phenomenal on this site. Bravo, bravo 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Outstanding.

Thank you

Tess (uk)

Good premise continues.

I must be missing something because the comments below are much more favorable than I'd expect.

Sex is actually pretty boring.

Three stars.

How is it that you can make sex banal, and that banality sexy? Remarkable writing. Hooked.

After reading this story I decided that I had to join Literotica. Just so that I could say "Bravo" for writing: "like an assassin picking up shell casings". Nicely done. Seven words that conjure up the perfect image.

And the other words are pretty good too! Thanks for writing 'em.

You should consider using all ten tags. It would help people find your work. And your work deserves to be found.