All Comments on 'A Cool Glass of Water'

by WildLion

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 2 years ago

Nice, sexy story with a good buildup. Punctuation could be improved but it was hot and steamy enough that it didn't really affect the read. Looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.

OvercriticalOvercriticalabout 2 years ago

A very sensuous story. Doesn't need an introduction or a follow up. Just sits well on its own 4*

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I have been reading a writing erotic fiction for a few years now and love a good fantasy. I enjoy it when people gain pleasure from my writings. In the past I have written stories for specific women in my life but here they are for you to enjoy. My writings are based on my fa...