by mydesires4U
Might be a good story but I got bored with it a third of the way through the first page. Nothing new or different.
This was excellent.
I usually don't visit the Romance section, but it felt like this was a prequel to a LW story so I gave it a shot. It's an excellent character exploration, with real people, if idealized a bit for our imaginations. Excellent build-up, sensual description of the action, and a nice transition to build from this intro to the next story.