All Comments on 'A Couple Finds Their Passion Again'

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lc69hunterlc69hunter11 months ago

very good first story

Reader2021Reader202111 months ago

5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

Very Good story; more please….

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Good first story!

5

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Might be a good story but I got bored with it a third of the way through the first page. Nothing new or different.

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spalding10 months ago

This was excellent.

I usually don't visit the Romance section, but it felt like this was a prequel to a LW story so I gave it a shot. It's an excellent character exploration, with real people, if idealized a bit for our imaginations. Excellent build-up, sensual description of the action, and a nice transition to build from this intro to the next story.

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