All Comments on 'A Dangerous Pair'

I see this is your first story! You did an awesome job and I was enthralled over the course of the entire story. You certainly have a knack for writing, and I eagerly await your next submission.

Wow! More, please.

That was brilliant.

Although I don't have that particular sex organ it perfectly summed up some decisions I never made.

Beautifully written! Your descriptions of what she sees and feels are perfect.

This one is a bit different in what took place and how it was written, and that was nice. I liked hearing what she didn’t and did connect with on the website.