All Comments on 'A Dark Tale Ch. 08'

by SylviaG

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
An amazing story.

Once again an absolute masterpiece. Can't wait for the continuation. Please though, let her be pregnant from her ordeal and let her carry it to term. It would be the wicked icing on the cake.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 6 years ago
I'm now a devoted fan

Your various chapters continue to surprise me. I'm not someone who has to be too strongly tethered to reality, and love the chance to suspend disbelief. Most of all I love your writing style. In my own stories about Melissa Smith-Jones, I even named a character Geoff as a quiet homage to your own Geoff, although they are nothing alike! I'm quite glad the story will continue! Five stars from me once again, yours, JB

trashcan44trashcan44almost 6 years ago
Suprise!

Well, I didn't see that coming! You always do the unexpected and I love it. Some of your best work SylviaG. I too can't wait for what comes next and the best part is, I have no idea what it will be! Best of luck young lady! XXX

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 6 years ago

I think you caught us all by surprise with that ending, but it was a good surprise all the same! I like your stories. I've noticed this series is a little 'darker' than previous ones, with more enforced sex and a smattering of BDSM thrown in for good measure. It makes for a far more entertaining tale, and I love it that your 'hero' bears the same name as yourself ! A bit of wishful thinking in there perhaps? You've done a very good job of whetting our appetites for 'A Second Dark Tale' also. xx

TatankaBillTatankaBillalmost 2 years ago

What fun this is to read! Another outstanding job, SylviaG.

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