All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach Ch. 01'

Great writing I liked the plot. Keep it going

and very HOT! Looking forward to reading the next installments!

Hoping the next installment includes more mc victims.

I can't wait for the next installment! So hot!!

If only dreams could come true. Id love to stumble on a potion that could help me get amongst this.......thanks very much! So where and what does Dan do now?

When might we get new chapters.

Decent if this was your first attempt, but it's got it's issues. MC has apparently known his sister's friends since they were 14, so at least four years, and yet he doesn't know their names? Either this guy's ignorant as fuck, or just stupid. Also, is he older or younger than his sister? You introduced him as if he were a high school student, yet his sister is the 18yo senior. .