All Comments on 'A Descent Ch. 01.1'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

very solid, good development and entertaining to the end. I'll look forward to seeing what happens next!

MiniwandMiniwandover 5 years ago
Good but can be better

Tye principle is a good idea. Hypnosis CD. It would have been nice to see a more detailed transformation. For example Mrs. Petrov thinks he is a good boy, then she trust him, after that she lets him be friend with her daughter and is attracted to him. Each time he sees her she had changed and became more and more atracted to him. With hypnosis you have to make things progress gradually and not all of a sudden.

zena99zena99over 5 years ago
CDs are great

Loved it. Of course now that the Mrs. is Malcolm's slave she will probably agree with him when he tells her that he is going to fuck her daughter. After all, she needs his cock.

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