All Comments on 'A Different Kind of Thief'

by RandomStorywriter01904

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griffin57griffin57almost 11 years ago
very interesting

Short, but to the point

animeturtleanimeturtlealmost 11 years ago
Very interesting

I agree with the other guy short and to the point. I suggest you make it longer or make another chapter and maybe make her a futanari for more play.

RandomStorywriter01904RandomStorywriter01904almost 11 years agoAuthor
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It might get better if I made it longer, but it might also become worse. I always fail to see why stories don't get into the main storyline as soon as possible. That's just the way I am. Short and to the point is my natural way of writing, so I won't be doing things any differently in that respect. Sorry.

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